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The charts below show the result of a survey about what peopel of differwncw age groups say makes them most happy

The charts below show the result of a survey about what peopel of differwncw age groups say makes them most happy
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Survey
Correct article usage
The survey
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 shows the different age groups and what makes them most happy. Overview, there
are
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two
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 pie charts that show the different topics about
makes
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what makes
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phappy
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happy
. The information is separated into
two
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 different
categories
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,
people
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 under
thirty
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 and
people
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 over
thirty
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. The
five
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areas
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 that make
people
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 happy under
thirty
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are
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hobbies
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, good
appearance
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, travelling,
work
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achievements
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 and
others
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. There
are
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three
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 that
are
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 the same for the over
thirty
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group
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groups
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. These
are
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hobbies
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,
work
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 and
others
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, with the
two
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 different
ones
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 being financial
security
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 and family.
categories
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,
people
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 under
thirty
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 and
people
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 over
thirty
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. The
five
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areas
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 that make
people
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 happy under
thirty
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are
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hobbies
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, good
appearance
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, travelling,
work
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achievements
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 and
others
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. There
are
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three
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 that
are
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 the same for the over
thirty
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group
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groups
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. These
are
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hobbies
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,
work
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 and
others
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, with the
two
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 different
ones
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 being financial
security
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 and family.
categories
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,
people
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 under
thirty
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 and
people
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 over
thirty
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. The
five
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areas
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 that make
people
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 happy under
thirty
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are
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hobbies
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, good
appearance
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, travelling,
work
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achievements
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 and
others
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. There
are
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three
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 that
are
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 the same for the over
thirty
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group
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groups
show examples
. These
are
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hobbies
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,
work
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 and
others
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, with the
two
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 different
ones
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 being financial
security
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 and family.
categories
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,
people
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 under
thirty
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 and
people
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 over
thirty
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. The
five
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areas
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 that make
people
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 happy under
thirty
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are
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hobbies
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, good
appearance
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, travelling,
work
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achievements
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 and
others
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. There
are
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three
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 that
are
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 the same for the over
thirty
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group
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groups
show examples
. These
are
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hobbies
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,
work
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 and
others
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, with the
two
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 different
ones
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 being financial
security
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 and family.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, categories, people, thirty, five, areas, hobbies, appearance, work, achievements, others, three, group, are, ones, security with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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