The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
We are given two charts. The pie chart explains the future goals of anthropology students
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that
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they pursued after their graduation.
Similarly
, the table shows their salaries after 5 years of working.
Overall
, we observe that minority pupils after degree completion went for part-time work, alongside, took admission in postgraduate studies.
Whereas
, those working in
government
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the government
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sector,
majority
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the majority
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had a salary of 100,000+. Digging deep into detail, we see in the circle chart, a total of 52%
alumni
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of alumni
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opted for
full time
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full-time
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work.
However
, there were a few
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(12%) that remained unemployed. Individuals, about whom no one had knowledge where they are and the
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that started
post-graduate
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the post-graduate
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study, both
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their proportions remained the same i.e., 8%.
Nevertheless
, 15% of teenagers were
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working
part time
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part-time
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. Now looking at the salaries table, we have three
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types
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of
employments
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employment
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, including Freelance consultants, Government Sector and Private companies. For
initial
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the initial
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two types, the salary remained the same, 5% of them were earning between 25000 to 49,999.
On the other hand
, 15% of them were earning $50,000 to 74,999. The third type showed
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a different
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pattern. $25000 – 49,999 salary was specified for 10%
workers
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and $50,000 to 74,999 income was allotted to 35%
workers
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.
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