The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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We are given two charts. The pie chart explains the future goals of anthropology students
which
they pursued after their graduation. Correct word choice
that
Similarly
, the table shows their salaries after 5 years of working.
Linking Words
Overall
, we observe that minority pupils after degree completion went for part-time work, alongside, took admission in postgraduate studies. Linking Words
Whereas
, those working in Linking Words
government
sector, Add an article
the government
majority
had a salary of 100,000+.
Digging deep into detail, we see in the circle chart, a total of 52% Add an article
the majority
a majority
alumni
opted for Change preposition
of alumni
full time
work. Add a hyphen
full-time
However
, there were a few Linking Words
percent
(12%) that remained unemployed. Individuals, about whom no one had knowledge where they are and the Change the spelling
per cent
one’s
that started Change noun form
ones
post-graduate
study, both Add an article
the post-graduate
of
their proportions remained the same i.e., 8%. Change preposition
apply
Nevertheless
, 15% of teenagers were Linking Words
find
working Change the form of the verb
found
part time
.
Now looking at the salaries table, we have three Add a hyphen
part-time
type
of Change to a plural noun
types
employments
, including Freelance consultants, Government Sector and Private companies. For Fix the agreement mistake
employment
initial
two types, the salary remained the same, 5% of them were earning between 25000 to 49,999. Correct article usage
the initial
On the other hand
, 15% of them were earning $50,000 to 74,999. The third type showed Linking Words
different
pattern. $25000 – 49,999 salary was specified for 10% Add an article
a different
workers
and $50,000 to 74,999 income was allotted to 35% Change preposition
of workers
workers
.Change preposition
of workers
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