The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.
The table illustrates the sales of the
products
by a coffee
shop in an office building on a particular weekday.
Generally, it is clear that
the products
sold significantly were coffee
, pastries, and sandwitch
. The Correct your spelling
sandwich
sandwiches
least
sold one was only tea. The most popular Correct your spelling
last
times
for selling products
were only at 7:30 - 10.30, 10:30 - 2.30, and 5.30 - 8.30. However
, there were the fewest selling time only at 2:30 - 5:30.
During 7.30 - 10.30 pastries was the biggest selling products
than Sandwitch and tea, which sold five times
more than sandwitch and almost two times
more than tea. The same comparison is possible to make about coffee
at the same time. Moreover
, during 5.30 - 8.30 coffee
was the biggest consumption product of all other products
that were sold at the same time.
Within 10.30 - 2.30 sandwiches witnessed the most sold product than others, however
, this
product was sold 4-5 times
less at other times
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