The table and chart below. Give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the chart shows how it was distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The table and pie

charts

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provide data about the

police

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budget in an area of Britain in the years 2017 and 2018.

Moreover

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, the table explains the source of

funds

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and

charts

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illustrate how the

funds

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are allocated.

Overall

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, the total budget numbers in 2018 from three different sources, 3.86m 318.6 million pounds, are greater than in 2017.

However

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, the pie chart depicts that

police

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staff received 76% more salary in 2017 than in 2018.

To begin

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with,

police

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get finance from the government, taxes paid by local people and other grants.

Besides

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police

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get more

funds

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in 2018 as compared to 2017

due to

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the budget being 318.6 million pounds and 304.7 million pounds respectively for 2018 and 2017.

In addition

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, there are three expenditures, shown in pie

charts

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, where the

funds

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were allotted and that are salaries, technology, and building and support. The similar aspect of both

charts

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is the same percentage of money is spent on technology services for both years

whereas

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we can observe a 6% increase in salaries and building and support categories in the chart over the span of the two years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words charts, police, funds with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 6 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

188 words

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