The mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, has great influence in shaping people's ideas and their minds.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer.

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been humanity's primary source of influence in shaping an individual's ideas and mind. I cannot stress how incredible

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an impact

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has brought us, especially with

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, so I completely agree with

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statement. For starters, to shape one's view, there must be a form of push to adopt and adapt, and

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is where we are prone to adopting an ideal, for

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we tend to look to an outsider's perspective on the matter and come to our own conclusion; we look no

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than the daily

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outlet. The television,

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and newspaper brief us on facts and ideas, for which we can

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and shape our own minds;

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, revolutionary ideals can be formed through the words of the

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you a communist? a socialist? or a fascist? Will the words of Lenin convince you or the opposer?

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has been a playground that challenges our critical thinking and beliefs; none has been more prevalent than the

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as a loudspeaker to expand effects among the

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audience. For multitudes of people,

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was a primary source of information and entertainment in the second and third decades of the twentieth century. Radios fostered a real-time national conversation during the challenging times of the Depression and World War

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the greatest force (before television and the internet) in developing a

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culture of sporting events like the Olympics, humorous programs like "Amos and Andy" and news all over the world. In conclusion, it is undeniably difficult to ignore the strong influences that the

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has given us, especially with

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. No matter how you perceive it, the

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will always remain an essential part of shaping who we are and the way we view things.