The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of owned and rented
resident
of the households in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
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residents
Overall
, the trend of owning accommodation had increased over the years. Conversely
, that of renting resident
had decreased constantly. The percentages of both owning and renting are at the same rate in 1971.
From 1918 to 1961, the percentage of owned Fix the agreement mistake
residents
resident
started at 23 Fix the agreement mistake
residents
percent
. Then
, it continuously increased to 40 percent
in 1961. Change the spelling
per cent
By contrast
, that of renting started at the
huge number, accounting for 77 Correct article usage
a
percent
. Unfortunately, it decreased gradually to 59 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 1961. Surprisingly, the percentages of both renting and owning accommodation were the same figure at 50 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 1971. From 1981 to 2011, the percentage of owned accommodation increased extremely to 79 Change the spelling
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percent
, which is a peak point. Change the spelling
per cent
Then
, it slightly dropped to 64 percent
in 2011. Change the spelling
per cent
Conversely
, that of rented resident
dropped dramatically, plunging to 31 Fix the agreement mistake
residents
percent
. Surprisingly, it rose Change the spelling
per cent
up
slightly to 35 Change preposition
apply
percent
in 2001.Change the spelling
per cent
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