The two pie charts below illustrate some employment patterns in United Kingdom in 1992.
The two pie charts below illustrate some employment patterns in
United
Kingdom in 1992.
Correct article usage
the United
Large
number of Change the article
A large
The large
women
working in clerical and related fields
, but men
work in managerial and professional positions.
The percentage
of women
working in managerial and professional fields
is 29 per cent
. However
, percentage
of Correct article usage
the percentage
men
working in the same fields
is 36%. Clerical and related fields
are more common in women
than men
, the percentage
is thirty one
per Add a hyphen
thirty-one
cent
at six per cent
.
The percentage
of other manuals is almost the same percentage
for men
and women
, it is twenty seven
per Add a hyphen
twenty-seven
cent
for female
and 26% for Fix the agreement mistake
females
male
. The Fix the agreement mistake
males
overall
lowest percentage
is general and labourersSubmitted by dnm.best on
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