The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparision where relevent.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparision where relevent.
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The given line
graph
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illustrates the
amount
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number
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of visitors who travelled to a specific Caribbean
island
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from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, the number of tourists travelling to
this
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island
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significantly increased.
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the
graph
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for visitors who preferred to stay on the
island
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almost stayed steady, the
graph
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for those who travelled by cruise ship fluctuated at the start of the period.
To begin
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with, there were almost no tourists travelling by cruise ships in 2010.
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, the
graph
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starts from just above 0,5 for those vacationers who decided to stay on the
island
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. It is clearly seen that the most popular period of time for guests residing on the
island
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was from 2013-2015 and 2017,at 1,5,
while
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the highest number of voyagers reached the peak in 2017, at 2. It explains that ,eventually more tourists chose to stay on cruise ships rather than on the
island
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by the end of the period shown.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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