The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.

The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.
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The line graphs demonstrate the average monthly expenditure that parents in Britain advocated for children’s sporting activities and compare the attendance of juveniles in three separate sports from 2008 to 2014.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in the amount of money spent on children’s participation in sports. With regard to the number of children taking part, football had precedence over the other two sports. In 2008, parents spent just around 20 pounds per month on their kids' sporting activities.
However
, the figure went up steadily over the 6-year period and eventually hit the highest point of about 32 pounds by 2014. Looking at the participant numbers, in 2018, football was the most popular kind of physical exercise possessing over 7.5
million
children, followed by swimming with 2
million
and athletics with fewer than 1
million
.
Whereas
soccer’s reputation remained relatively stable, participation in athletics went up exponentially and reach a fivefold increase
at the end
of the period. A similar pattern on a smaller scale was seen in the number of juveniles who got involved in swimming.
This
figure almost doubled and peaked at approximately 4
million
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • participation rates
  • trends
  • over the period
  • fluctuations
  • incremental increase
  • sharp decline
  • steady growth
  • sporting activities
  • athletic gear
  • membership fees
  • coaching expenses
  • inflation-adjusted
  • disposable income
  • socioeconomic factors
  • extracurricular
  • grassroots development
  • investment in youth sport
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