The percentage of overweight children in western societies has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer solution.
In
Last
decade cases of obesity Correct article usage
the Last
has
increased by 20 Change the verb form
have
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Main
reasons are eating junk food and lack of physical activities. The most viable solution Correct article usage
The main
of
Change preposition
to
this
problem
is promoting healthy eating and exercise by children
.
The overweight problem
among children
has grown and became
Wrong verb form
become
serious
concern for society. The main cause of Add an article
a serious
this
problem
is eating junk foods
. Most Fix the agreement mistake
food
of
Change preposition
apply
children
enjoy fast-food
Correct your spelling
fast food
instead
of taking healthy meal
which contain carbohydrates, proteins etc. Fix the agreement mistake
meals
Furthermore
, lack of exercise by children
is also
A major factor children
becoming overweight. Change preposition
in children
Children
these days do not engage in physical activities like exercises. For example
, In US
, Most Correct article usage
the US
children
engage in indoor activities like playing videogames or spending time on social media.
To find the way for
Change preposition
to
this
problem
is to inculcate habit
of eating healthy meals. If Add an article
the habit
a habit
children
eat healthy food their body
will gain muscles and Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
loose
fat. which will help in reducing body fat in their bodies. Strict diet Correct your spelling
lose
pattern
need to follow by them. Fix the agreement mistake
patterns
Moreover
,Another way of reducing weight is doing exercises like walking, weightlifting and so on. By adopting exercise
regime Correct article usage
an exercise
children
will loose
excess body weight and Replace the word
lose
became
healthier. To cite an example, In countries like India Change the form of the verb
become
children
engage in sports like cricket , football which makes physically
fit and healthy.
In conclusion, to overcome Correct pronoun usage
them physically
problem
of overweight among Add an article
the problem
children
. Habits like healthy eating and exercising needs
to be inculcated among them . IT will make them leaner, fitter and strong. simultaneously we will overcome Change the verb form
need
problem
of obesity among them . Add an article
the problem
this
will help in controlling obesity in children
on worldwide
basis.Add an article
a worldwide
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