Differing amount of nitrogen oxide by four types of vehicles.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line illustrates the amount of
nitrogen
oxide
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emissions
emmisions
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emissions
from
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a
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diesel
car
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cars
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,
pertrol
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petrol
patrol
car
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cars
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and lorries, buses
It is clear that
. The
amout
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amount
of
nitrogen
oxide
used
from
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the buses be
higest
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highest
.
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the figure for
nitrogen
oxide
emissions from diesel
car
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cars
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was
lowest
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the lowest
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.
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, the amount of
pertrol
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petrol
patrol
car
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cars
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and lorries
was
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used
nitrogen
oxide
witnessed stability at any speed. Looking at the table. There was a significant increase from 40
km
to 43
km
in the
amout
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amount
of the buses
reviced
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revised
nitrogen
oxide
, which was
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the higest
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higest
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highest
.
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MeanWhile
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the figure for the diesel
car
was run
nitrogen
oxide
gas experienced a
slow down
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slowdown
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from 8
km
to 4
km
, which was
highest
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. As can be seen, the amount of The Lorriers run by
nitro
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a nitro
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gas slight increase from 11
km
to 12
km
.At the same
time
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Petrol
car
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cars
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saw a considerable decline from 33
km
to 25
km
maximum speed.
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