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The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts below compare the
area
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 and
population
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 distribution of seven different continents around the
world
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 at the present time. It is noticeable that Asia has the highest percentage of the
world
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's
land
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area
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 and
also
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 contains most of the
world
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's
population
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 as the most densely populated
continent
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,
while
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 the continents of Oceania and Antarctica take up the least
land
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area
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 and
population
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 in the
world
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, respectively. 61% of the
world
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's
population
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 lives in Asia, just including 30% of the
world
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's
land
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area
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.
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, the second largest
continent
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 is Africa with 20% of the
world
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's
land
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area
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 with 13% of the
population
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 of the
world
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 settling.
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 Europe is the third most populous
continent
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 in the
world
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, only 7% of
world
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land
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 belongs to
this
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continent
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.
On the other hand
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, North and South America, as continents whose
area
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-to-
population
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 ratio is below one, have 8 and 5.5% of the
world
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's
population
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, respectively,
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 North and South America contain 16% and 12% of the
world
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's
land
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area
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.
In addition
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,
although
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 Oceania covers 6% of the
world
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’s
land
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area
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, only 0.5% of the
world
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's people live there and
finally
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, Antarctica with about 9% of the
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's
land
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area
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 does not have any inhabitants.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, population, world, land, continent with synonyms.
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