The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts below compare the
area
and
population
distribution of seven different continents around the
world
at the present time. It is noticeable that Asia has the highest percentage of the
world
's
land
area
and
also
contains most of the
world
's
population
as the most densely populated
continent
,
while
the continents of Oceania and Antarctica take up the least
land
area
and
population
in the
world
, respectively. 61% of the
world
's
population
lives in Asia, just including 30% of the
world
's
land
area
.
Similarly
, the second largest
continent
is Africa with 20% of the
world
's
land
area
with 13% of the
population
of the
world
settling.
Although
Europe is the third most populous
continent
in the
world
, only 7% of
world
land
belongs to
this
continent
.
On the other hand
, North and South America, as continents whose
area
-to-
population
ratio is below one, have 8 and 5.5% of the
world
's
population
, respectively,
while
North and South America contain 16% and 12% of the
world
's
land
area
.
In addition
,
although
Oceania covers 6% of the
world
’s
land
area
, only 0.5% of the
world
's people live there and
finally
, Antarctica with about 9% of the
world
's
land
area
does not have any inhabitants.
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