The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts below compare the
area
and population
distribution of seven different continents around the world
at the present time.
It is noticeable that Asia has the highest percentage of the world
's land
area
and also
contains most of the world
's population
as the most densely populated continent
, while
the continents of Oceania and Antarctica take up the least land
area
and population
in the world
, respectively.
61% of the world
's population
lives in Asia, just including 30% of the world
's land
area
. Similarly
, the second largest continent
is Africa with 20% of the world
's land
area
with 13% of the population
of the world
settling. Although
Europe is the third most populous continent
in the world
, only 7% of world
land
belongs to this
continent
.
On the other hand
, North and South America, as continents whose area
-to-population
ratio is below one, have 8 and 5.5% of the world
's population
, respectively, while
North and South America contain 16% and 12% of the world
's land
area
. In addition
, although
Oceania covers 6% of the world
’s land
area
, only 0.5% of the world
's people live there and finally
, Antarctica with about 9% of the world
's land
area
does not have any inhabitants.Submitted by sajjad on
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