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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
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The illustrated graph depicts the
consumption
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 of
fish
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 and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
Generally
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 almost all the lines show the decline movement, except one, which is
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 chicken
consumption
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, that showed a gradation. First of all, in 1979 the highest and lowest indexes of
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 illustrated
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beef
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 and
fish
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consumption
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 with about 220 and 55
grams
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 per person per week respectively.
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, in 1989 two lines of chicken and
beef
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consumption
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 met at the point of 200
grams
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 per person. Turning to the latest indexes,
highest
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 mark was shown by chicken
consumption
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 with about 220
grams
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,
whereas
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fish
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consumption
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also
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 showed the lowest index. The biggest difference between
two
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the two
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 years
show
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the
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beef
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consumption
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with
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 about 120
grams
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 and the smallest was shown by
fish
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consumption
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with
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 only five
grams
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, beef, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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