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For some people learning in a group is the most effective way.while other prefer one one-on-one instruction .disscusn both view .what is your opinion ?

#people #group #instruction #disscusn
Creative fields and exact sciences are always contested. There is no shortage of
opinion
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opinions
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 on whether it is better to learn
art
 and
literature
 or
math
 and
sceince
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science
. In my opinion, it is vital for
people
 to acquire knowledge in
math
 and
science
. In
this
essay
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 my point of view shall be explained.
To begin
 with,
math
 and
science
 move our society forward. Without exact
sciences
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,sciences
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 our world would
be
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suffer from
lack
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a lack
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 of
technologies
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technology
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. Technologies improve the quality of our lives and provide aid in many aspects,
while
art
 and
literature
do not do it neither
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do not do it either
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 explicitly
nor
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or
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 implicitly. It conjures up a well-known article from
Scientific
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the Scientific
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 American journal. In that article the world without technologies is described:
people
 cannot communicate and exchange information through the Internet, doctors cannot heal patients from dangerous illnesses, countries are dependent on nature and cannot provide basic needs for everyone, etc. If humanity does not want to live in
such
 difficult conditions,
people
 should study
math
 and
science
.
Moreover
, students who are fond of
math
 and
science
 make more money in their future jobs. If one desires to live
financial
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 independent and earn a lot of money, he or she should study exact sciences.
According to
 statistics,
average
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the average
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 wage right after graduation of students who were studying
math
 and
science
 is fifteen
percent
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per cent
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 higher
on
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in
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the labor
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labor
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labour
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 market than
average
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the average
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 wage of students who were studying
art
 and
literature
. It is a huge financial benefit for young
people
 who just start their career paths. In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is more essential and advantageous for
people
 to learn
math
 and
science
 than
art
 and
literature
.
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The Usefullness
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Usefullness
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Usefulness
 of these subjects for
well-being
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the well-being
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 of mankind and
possibility
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the possibility
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 to earn a lot of money for young employees are the major reasons which explain my opinion.
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