The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (СОг) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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The graph represents the average

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dioxide

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emissions

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per head in the United

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Sweden

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, Italy, and Portugal from 1967 until 2007.

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among the United

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, there were the highest metric

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, if match them with Italy and Portugal. There were needed 20

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to wait for the drop in

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for the same countries. Italy and Portugal experienced the least

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with the United

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. during the past 20

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. Yet, within 20

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began slowly increasing until

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year. In 1967, in the United

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there were 3 metric tons more

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than in

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produced 6 times more than Italy. Italy was 3 metric tons heavier than Portugal. Within 40

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, in Italy and Portugal,

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dioxide

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emissions

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produced an increase four times greater than in past times.

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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (СОг) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Most schools give their students grades based on their performance. Why do so many schools utilize this method of student evaluation? In what ways does this affect students?

"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.

Task 2: Some people think hosting major international sporting events brings a lot of advantages to a country, while others believe there are more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

You are going to teach English to your friend’s child. Write a letter to your past English teacher to ask if you can borrow some books from him/her. In your letter tell your teacher about the child; say when and where you will teach the child; explain what books you would like to borrow.

Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.