The table shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games. Write at least 150 words.

The table shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games.

Write at least 150 words.
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The table shows a comparison of medal numbers gained in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games by winners from 10 different nations.
Overall
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, Norway took the lead with the highest number in every kind of medal,
whereas
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the
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of Swedish exhibited a big gap with only one bronze medal obtained.
It is clear that
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Norway was ranked top 1 with 14 gold
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, 14 silver
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, and 11 bronze ones. The second highest was registered by Germany with the same number of gold
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as Norway and totalled 31 pieces with 10 in silver and 7 in bronze, which was slightly higher when compared to the totality of Canada.
This
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can be seen clearly in the table that there were 11 first prizes, and the second and third prizes were 8 and 10 respectively acquired by Canadian athletes. The remaining countries, including the US, European countries, and South Korea Showed stable results in the games, with the number of
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mainly ranging from 4 to 8 pieces. The US had the most gold
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with 9 pieces,
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3 was the lowest silver for Austria. Sweden is the only country with only 1 medal and it was the third prize ranking.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words medals with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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