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The graph below shows the average length of stay last year (in days) for serious injuries for different age groups in private and public hospitals in Queensland, Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average length of stay last year (in days) for serious injuries for different age groups in private and public hospitals in Queensland, Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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As an introduction, the line graph illustrates the mean duration of hospital stay of
patients
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 with serious injuries, by
age
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 categories, in both the public and private sectors, in Queensland, Australia, during the
last
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 year.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the length of stay was higher in public health care centres than that of private ones in all
age
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 groups.
In addition
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, more than fifteen-year-old
patients
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 were admitted to non-government centres,
whereas
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 the others provided care for all
age
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 categories.
Firstly
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, the average number of
days
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 in the government sector rose considerably from approximately 5
days
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 for 0 to 4 years to reach 60
days
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 in the 25 to 29
group
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.
Secondly
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, a slight decline of about 20
days
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 can be observed in the 35 to 39
age
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group
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.
However
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, the figures increased sharply again in the next
age
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group
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 from about 20
days
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.
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, these numbers fell gradually with some fluctuations in between, to reach roughly 20
days
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 total in more than 85-year-old
patients
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. In comparison, at private nursing homes, the duration increased substantially from 5
days
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 in 15 to 19 old
patients
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 to around 40
days
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 in 25 to 29 years.
Thereafter
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, the numbers remained relatively stable at about 20
days
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 for the rest of the
patients
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 with some slight fluctuations and ultimately ended up at the same number as the other centre for the oldest
group
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words patients, age, days, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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