The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australia water consumption for last year.

The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australia water consumption for last year.
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The bar graph depicts the average
water
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consumed in various Australian cities in kilolitres per property. The pie chart,
on the other hand
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, illustrates the percentage of usage for different activities in each city.
Overall
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, Perth is observed to consume the most amount of
water
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(300
kL
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)
whereas
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Canberra consumes just about 125
kL
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, the least. In each of these cities, about 67% is used for Agricultural purposes which is the greatest
while
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only 2% in mining making it the lowest. Sydney uses around 200
kL
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of
water
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while
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Adelaide and Brisbane use closer to 250
kL
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of which Brisbane is the greater consumer of the two. Melbourne's usage is a little below 150 kilolitres.
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, 9% of
water
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is used in households, the second-highest in number. Electricity and gas supply and
water
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supply, sewage , and drainage take up 7% each. Other industries require 4% of
water
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distributed in the city
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, kl with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average consumption
  • distribution
  • sector
  • domestic use
  • industrial use
  • agricultural use
  • urban areas
  • rural areas
  • trend
  • resource management
  • policy implications
  • ecosystem impact
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