Some people say that it is possible for a county to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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as everybody knows that growing a
city
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or
county
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's economic situation depends
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politics of the country, tourism, coulter, history, nature, and of course, as
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, a clean
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. The
county
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can be both a clean
environment
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and rich but it needs some economic and
education
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programs and plan for them. these can be listed as follows.
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the most important thing is
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for
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county
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, because it is possible to educate people and
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only not gives the school, at the same time can give municipality for folk.
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, Tunceli
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county
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,
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is north of Turkey. municipality of Tunceli has a wonderful program about
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folk. they learn how can clean the
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for adults and children. it is so important because if the
city
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not
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clean won't visit tourists there. on the other ,hand many folks don't know why we must keep clean our
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.
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tourism is so important for
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city
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because many citizens earn their money
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through
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tourism. That's why meucipolity should repair old buildings and historical places,
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as Gaziantep
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. They repair many old buildings, Cassel, and open museum and nature make it better, after
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work a lot of people visit there.
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some cities and counties use clean energy
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as solar panels, and wind energy they can both earn money and keep clean their eir.
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, İzmir is using alternative energy for
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lights, fabrics and homes.
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,
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the paragraphs above it is possible for both the clan
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and the rich
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. In my opinion, for the
county
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to be economically successful and clean
environment
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. they have to make good programmes for the economy and everything. Everything is possible only we should want to hardly.
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