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Some people say that it is possible for a county to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

#people #county #environment
as everybody knows that growing a
city
 or
county
's economic situation depends
according to
 politics of the country, tourism, coulter, history, nature, and of course, as
last
, a clean
environment
. The
county
 can be both a clean
environment
 and rich but it needs some economic and
education
 programs and plan for them. these can be listed as follows.
first,
the most important thing is
education
 for
develop
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county
, because it is possible to educate people and
education
 only not gives the school, at the same time can give municipality for folk.
for example
, Tunceli
county
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County
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,
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 is north of Turkey. municipality of Tunceli has a wonderful program about
education
 folk. they learn how can clean the
city
 for adults and children. it is so important because if the
city
not
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is not
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 clean won't visit tourists there. on the other ,hand many folks don't know why we must keep clean our
city
.
Second,
tourism is so important for
develop
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developing
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city
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cities
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 because many citizens earn their money
by
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through
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 tourism. That's why meucipolity should repair old buildings and historical places,
such
 as Gaziantep
city
. They repair many old buildings, Cassel, and open museum and nature make it better, after
the
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work a lot of people visit there.
third,
some cities and counties use clean energy
such
 as solar panels, and wind energy they can both earn money and keep clean their eir.
For instance
, İzmir is using alternative energy for
city
 lights, fabrics and homes.
to sum up
,
according to
 the paragraphs above it is possible for both the clan
environment
 and the rich
city
. In my opinion, for the
county
 to be economically successful and clean
environment
. they have to make good programmes for the economy and everything. Everything is possible only we should want to hardly.
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