You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. apologise for the damage to the item explain what happened say how you are going to fix the issue

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Dear Tomi, I feel disappointed about the vandalism on the black phone charger I collected from you.

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is a result of where I plugged my phone, where it was mishandled by a friend's girl-child. I went to the mall to get a few things for the house when the charger got impaired. I was told that my neighbour who

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doubles as my friend brought along her daughter to our inn. Unfortunately,

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female child went into the room where I was charging the phone and viola the disc tip had broken before anyone got there. I plan to give the disk to an engineer that will help check and fix it if possible and if not possible a new disc will be ordered to replace the damaged one. I felt really sad about

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misfortune. Please find a place in your heart to forgive me. Warm regards, Bunmi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Borrowed
Unfortunate incident
Regret
Unintentional
Circumstances
Remedy
Repair
Replacement
Sincerely
Forgiveness
Rectify
Understanding

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