You recently organised an all day meeting for your company,which took place in a local hotel.In their feedback,participants at the meeting said that they like the hotel,they were unhappy about the foodthat was served for lunch.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
letter to the manager of the hotel.I am very happy that my people do like your hotel and
also
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like
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the enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
.They feel very comfortable doing
all day
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all-day
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meeting in your hotel,but they are unhappy about your food services which are very oily most of them
weare
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are
burn
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burned
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and damaged and very
unhygine
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unhygienic
hygiene
.You should suggest
them
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Food should be
cleanand
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clean and
not
over cooked
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overcooked
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as well
hygine
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hygiene
is the most important.
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