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Many people believe that education standards have declined in recent times, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.

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Declination of
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 quality, particularly in literacy and numeracy is becoming more widespread in many parts of the world.
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 the solutions to
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 problem. There are a variety of different causes for
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 matter. The first thing I want to mention is that technological development substitutes the ability of literacy and numeracy. The prevalence of new technologies creates a loss in traditional writing and calculating skills which leads to declining
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. Another contributing factor is the imperfect
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 system.
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, students are allowed to choose the subjects they want to learn so that they can pass the difficult subjects like math or
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 and
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 choice makes a worse situation Fortunately, There are serval solutions that governments could take to solve
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 problem.
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, they can request handwriting of homework and no calculator in mathematics exams which will improve the ability of
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 and numeracy of students.
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, Math and
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 should be added as compulsory subjects in studying.
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, schools should lower the knowledge of mathematics and
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 which will guarantee students don't give up on the new program. In conclusion, Declination of
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 quality is a serious problem that we have to take immediately by changing the
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 system which can tackle the issue to reduce the effects
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