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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, ltaly and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, ltaly and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives information about the amount of
carbon
dioxide
 in
tonnes
 that was emitted by
people
 in The United
Kingdom
,
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal per person in the years between 1967 and 2007.
Overall
,
Sweden
 and The United
Kingdom
 produced the most
Carbon
dioxide
 in the year 1967 decreased the amount of
carbon
dioxide
 in 2007.
While
people
 in Italy and Portugal created the least
carbon
dioxide
 in 1967 trended to rise up in 2007. In the year 1967,slightly over one ton of
Carbon
dioxide
 creation by the population in Portugal
while
 the vast majority of
carbon
dioxide
 which was around ten
tonnes
 was come from
people
 who live in The United
Kingdom
. Ten years later in 1977, the
carbon
dioxide
 in
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal significantly increased to slightly above 10
tonnes
, 6
tonnes
 and 2
tonnes
 respectively.
In contrast
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,
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The United
Kingdom
 remained stable at approximately 11
tonnes
. From 1977 to 2007, 6
tonnes
 of
carbon
dioxide
 were reduced by
people
 in
Sweden
 and around 2
tonnes
 by residents in The United
Kingdom
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, tonnes, people, kingdom, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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