The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, ltaly and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives information about the amount of The United
carbon
dioxide
in tonnes
that was emitted by people
in The United Kingdom
, Sweden
, Italy and Portugal per person in the years between 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, Sweden
and The United Kingdom
produced the most Carbon
dioxide
in the year 1967 decreased the amount of carbon
dioxide
in 2007. While
people
in Italy and Portugal created the least carbon
dioxide
in 1967 trended to rise up in 2007.
In the year 1967,slightly over one ton of Carbon
dioxide
creation by the population in Portugal while
the vast majority of carbon
dioxide
which was around ten tonnes
was come from people
who live in The United Kingdom
. Ten years later in 1977, the carbon
dioxide
in Sweden
, Italy and Portugal significantly increased to slightly above 10 tonnes
, 6 tonnes
and 2 tonnes
respectively. In contrast
Add a comma
,
Kingdom
remained stable at approximately 11 tonnes
. From 1977 to 2007, 6 tonnes
of carbon
dioxide
were reduced by people
in Sweden
and around 2 tonnes
by residents in The United Kingdom
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