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n many countries large amounts of foods are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?

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seriouse
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serious
food
waste
 could be seen in many nations nowadays for various causes,
such
 as a higher standard for
food
 safety,
as well as
 the better capacity of massive production. Both governments and individuals have
obligation
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 to address
such
 issues, including stringent
the
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regulation for
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a restaurant
the restaurant
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restaurant
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restaurants
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 to
disposal
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dispose
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food
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of food
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, or
avoiding
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avoid
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purchase
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purchasing
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 pre-made products. One of the cogent reasons derived for a large amount of
food
waste
 is
due to
 many restaurants nowadays tend to
disposal
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dispose
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food
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of food
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 on
daily
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a daily
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 basis to ensure the safety of consumers.
For instance
, many
Japenese
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Japanese
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 restaurants have
appolicies
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policies
 to ensure all
leftover
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leftovers
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 being throw away on
daily
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a daily
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 basis since most of them are made with raw
ingrediants
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ingredients
,
such
 as Sashimi and sushi rolls. On top of that, advanced technologies reduce the costs of
productions
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production
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, leading to an unbalance between
demandings
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demanding
 and
supplying
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supply
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 in
food
 markets.
On the other hand
, there are some countermeasures that could cope
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 problems as
suce
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such
, first of all, authorities have
power
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the power
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 to stop unnecessary
food
waste
 in restaurants by applying fines for
such
 behaviour to deter owners from
food
waste
.
Secondly
, individuals
also
 play
virtal
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vital
virtual
 roles to reduce unnecessary
food
waste
,
such
 as purchasing only
small
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a small
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 amount of
food
 each time to prevent possible
wasts
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wastes
waste
. Statistics have shown
a
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serious
food
weasts
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waste
 in
America
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American
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 families
due to
 their
habbits
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habits
 of buying a large amount of
food
. To summarise, it is inevitable that
food
waste
 become a big issue in the world for
variouse
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various
 reasons, including concerns regarding
food
 hazards, and high production derived from advanced technologies, which takes the effort of both governments and individuals to address
such
 problems.
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