Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is no doubt true that

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pollution is getting more and more popular in some cities centre, leading to the government

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a campaign that encourages people to use public transportation

instead

of their personal vehicles. From my perspective, the disadvantages of the phenomenon far outweigh the advantages in equal measure. The first benefit of

this

trend towards the prohibition of private vehicles is that making impacts significantly on environmental pollution. Particularly, the usage of cars, trucks, and motorbikes is diminished, resulting in the amount of greenhouse gas emissions emitted into the atmosphere. To be more specific, a single

bus

shuttle can serve more than fifty people, which

otherwise

would be the drivers of fifty cars or motorcycles. A

further

argument is that it is likely to affect transportation,

in other words

, the working force

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their own vehicle to go to work or go home at peak hours,

consequently

,

this

causes

traffic

congestion in some big urban. Despite the positives mentioned above, it seems to me that the restriction of private means of transport is a negative development.

Firstly

, commuting with their own vehicle

instead

of public transport is more private and convenient for them. A typical example is that if you used a

bus

to go to the company, you would wait for the programmed

bus

, and might be late for work.

Furthermore

, there is a risk of being pickpocketed or getting sick as you have to crowded on the

bus

.

Finally

,

this

plan could not be ineffective for smaller countries with conveyance options

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and can make

traffic

jams over peak hours. In conclusion, banning the usage of private vehicles could solve

traffic

pollution but it’s not convenient for some people and

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daily

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jams in smaller towns.