Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It’s widely accepted that conducting scientific
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is a typical high income with high risks project,
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are capable to undertake the risk of scientific
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and provide sufficient capital for scientists to complete their
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, I disagree with the claim that
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governments
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ought to dominate all
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scientific
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. On the one hand,
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governments
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have an undeniable responsibility for
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in some key areas. For one thing,
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into nuclear technology, national
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or military intelligence is in the national interest or involves high levels of secrecy and should be carried out only by the government.
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, in basic scientific
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, which is directed purely towards the advancement of knowledge, or where results cannot be guaranteed, there is little incentive for the private sector to invest in these areas and
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the
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take the leading role.
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, the aforementioned examples do not automatically mean that
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situation should be suitable under all circumstances. There are some reasons for private
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to participate in scientific
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with,
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is done more efficiently by private
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due to
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the fact that they are
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, pushing them
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their best to enhance
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rate
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. Every dollar is spent wisely to ensure maximum benefits and every resource is used effectively to avoid waste.
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, based on the market-oriented approach of private
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, the outcomes they have developed are closely associated with the market need.
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, excessive government intervention may affect scientists'
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and limit their ability to freely create. In conclusion, for some
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that involves national security issues or projects with
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probability of return, it’s responsible for
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to manage. But in other cases,
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as developing new products, private
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may perform better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific research
  • government oversight
  • ethical guidelines
  • public interest
  • public funding
  • transparency
  • widespread access
  • long-term societal benefits
  • profit motive
  • biased findings
  • restricted research
  • collaboration
  • bureaucratic delays
  • political influence
  • innovation
  • regulations
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