Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. Discus both sides and give your opinion.

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decades, owned private cars or motorbikes have been accepted by governments of many countries. It opened a spark of heated debate about whether
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should be banned in
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centres to measure the
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of
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in cities but other commuters think
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not an effective solution. My opinion is there should
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no cars and motorbikes in the
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centres to solve some existing environmental pollution problems and more. For the main reason, nowadays, when an enormous number of people take part in traffic with private
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, it not only causes a
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of
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in the
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of cities but
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causes air and noise pollution excessively, much toxic fumes are released into the environment and tons of noises from
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to make decreasing of good condition living of citizens, make an impact in negative ways. The prohibited
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in the
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environmental problems,
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, It will be the best measure of
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more opportunities for tourism development.
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, Ho Chi Minh
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would be more attractive to tourists if It solved
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. In the contrasting view, commuters will
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difficult to work in the
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. Because there
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enough public bus routes or public transportation for them to communicate with the
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, It
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them to be inconvenient.
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, living in the
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centre
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is not easy for them because of too expensive to rent or buy real estate; some families can not be able to live in the
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centre
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because they have senior people living together who find peace in the countryside, not overcrowded.
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, many workers
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in big families in London, Japan, and Vietnam live in the suburbs and have to work in the
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centre
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every day in their private car. In conclusion, the
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of
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in cities will be solved effectively if the council have more routes and more variety of public transportation connections between the countryside and the
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for commuters. Again, as an environmental, lover I always support the government to solve traffic overcrowded if It is a protective environment action.
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