Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. Discus both sides and give your opinion.
Recent
decades, owned private cars or motorbikes have been accepted by governments of many countries. It opened a spark of heated debate about whether Change preposition
In recent
vehicles
should be banned in city
centres to measure the problem
of congestion
in cities but other commuters think that is
not an effective solution. My opinion is there should have
no cars and motorbikes in the Verb problem
be
city
centres to solve some existing environmental pollution problems and more.
For the main reason, nowadays, when an enormous number of people take part in traffic with private vehicles
, it not only causes a problem
of congestion
in the centre
of cities but also
causes air and noise pollution excessively, much toxic fumes are released into the environment and tons of noises from vehicles
to make decreasing of good condition living of citizens, make an impact in negative ways. The prohibited vehicles
in the centre
city
, It
will Correct pronoun usage
apply
be solved
environmental problems, Wrong verb form
solve
moreover
, It will be the best measure of congestion
, be created
more opportunities for tourism development. Wrong verb form
create
For instance
, Ho Chi Minh City
would be more attractive to tourists if It solved this
problem
.
In the contrasting view, commuters will be
difficult to work in the Verb problem
find it
city
. Because there do
not Verb problem
are
have
enough public bus routes or public transportation for them to communicate with the Verb problem
apply
city
, It causes
them to be inconvenient. Verb problem
is
On the other hand
, living in the city
centre
is not easy for them because of too expensive to rent or buy real estate; some families can not be able to live in the city
centre
because they have senior people living together who find peace in the countryside, not overcrowded. For example
, many workers live
in big families in London, Japan, and Vietnam live in the suburbs and have to work in the Correct pronoun usage
who live
city
centre
every day in their private car.
In conclusion, the problem
of congestion
in cities will be solved effectively if the council have more routes and more variety of public transportation connections between the countryside and the city
for commuters. Again, as an environmental, lover I always support the government to solve traffic overcrowded if It is a protective environment action.Submitted by phanminhman07 on
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structure
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introduction/conclusion
Include a clear introduction and conclusion that encapsulate the main points discussed and your final opinion.
supporting arguments
Support main points with consistent and relevant explanations or examples.
task response
Address all parts of the task, providing a balanced discussion of both views and a clear personal opinion.
idea development
Develop ideas thoroughly to demonstrate clear and comprehensive understanding of the topic.
examples
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