Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Moving with the times, unemployment has been normalised thanks to the financial aid the government has offered. Relying on
authorities
generosity, these Change noun form
authorities'
authority's
people
are associated with a pain in the neck of the local administration's funds.
Firstly
, not all people
enjoy their job
however
, they tend to go to work ignoring the disrespect, tiredness and the
low Correct article usage
apply
pay-check
. Now that employees have their own party and association, in society they can request their own rights Correct your spelling
paycheck
therefore
, creating adequate conditions during shifts. There is no need to be unemployed for a long period of time. Add the comma(s)
,therefore
For instance
, a
data made in Correct article usage
apply
US
shows that almost 45% Correct article usage
the US
out
of Change preposition
apply
job
seekers don't actually search for a job
hence
, they wait for support. Not only they
drawback the economy, but they Add a missing verb
do they
also
stagnate it by requesting social aids
.
Fix the agreement mistake
aid
On the other hand
, government
needs to think up in what ways should the unemployed Add an article
the government
people
be exploited therefore
, voluntary work has the answer. Voluntary work needs to cover all the working fields therefore
, adjusting it to the people
's references of their past jobs, the
society can rely on the volunteers that their Correct article usage
apply
job
is done by profesionals
. Correct your spelling
professionals
For
instance
if an ex-gardener can't find a Add a comma
,instance
job
, authorities can enroll
him in being Change the spelling
enrol
responsable
Correct your spelling
responsible
of
the local park.
Change preposition
for
To conclude
, the main idea suggest
that long-term Change the verb form
suggests
job
seekers need to be used in a
adequate way to Change the article
an
combate
the economic drawback caused by them. Each individual needs to record Correct your spelling
combat
a
progress in Remove the article
apply
Correct article usage
the enviorment's
enviorment's
well-being.Correct your spelling
environments
environment's
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