Task 1: (Table) The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.

Task 1: (Table) The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the growth of population, average fertility
rate
, and life expectancy at
birth
in
nations
with categorized
income
levels in 2002 and 2004.
Overall
,
higher
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income
countries
experienced lower population growth and average
birth
per woman.
Additionally
, all
nations
witnessed an increase in life expectancy at
birth
for the period. Regarding the population growth
rate
,
high
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income
countries
witnessed a minimal drop from 0.8% in 2002 to 0.7% in 2004,
while
the figure for
middle
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income
nations
experienced a plateau at 0.9%. Despite having the highest
rate
throughout the period, the percentage of
low
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income
countries
dipped slightly from 2% in 2002 to 1.8% in 2004. Concerning the fertility
rate
, female citizens from
high
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income
countries
gave
birth
to an average of 1.7 infants in both years, which was the lowest. The statistics for middle and
low
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income
nations
were 2.2 and 3.9 in 2002, respectively, after which they both decreased by around 0.1 in 2004. Turning to life expectancy at
birth
,
high
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income
countries
ranked first at 78 years old in 2002. The next highest data was
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middle
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income
nations
at 69.1, followed by
low
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low-income
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income
countries
at 58.1. In 2004, all
countries
saw an increase of approximately 0.8 in
this
category.
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