.Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

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Sleep is a paramount factor for people’s healthy life.
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era folk are grumbling with lack of sleep. In
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, essay I will discuss why nation living in
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environment causes less sleep and
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how to settle the sleep problem with a proper job plan. On the
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hand, there is much information that affective less sleep in a crowd. I would like to say for
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main argument is the performance environment. In
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world everybody to wants live with luxurious life
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they always try to be finically stable.
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, they are working long hours without rest.
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, company lower level staff most probably task overtime moment. Because, usually that category salary scale level is very low. Because of, that they are working long hours.
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, some studies said, a lot of accidents during night time transport service and construction service.
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, the clue is less sleep. Point out, construction site most probably
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during the night occasion because the day presents so much noises
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the population.
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, a truck driver is wanted to drive the vehicle on a clear road.
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, prevent accidents to public and animals.
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, as I above mentioned problems we can sort out working with a proper work plan. If anyone trials a shift wise people can get a chance the sleeping.
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, we can use some strategies for truck drivers. As an example
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trip can use two drivers. More often, the company provide driver assistance but they don’t have permission to drive the vehicle because I suggest better provide
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more operator.
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motorist is working in between another
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to enable to sleep. In conclusion, my point of view is whatever the reasons for less sleeping and
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society uses some actions enable to
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of sleeping
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Insomnia
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Sleep disorders
  • Sleep quality
  • Fatigue
  • Exhaustion
  • Restless
  • Restorative sleep
  • REM sleep
  • Circadian rhythm
  • Sleep hygiene
  • Napping
  • Sleep duration
  • Melatonin
  • Sleep-inducing
  • Drowsiness
  • Sleep disturbances
  • Obstructive sleep apnea
  • Snoring
  • Sleepwalking
  • Sleep talking
  • Shift work
  • Sleeping pills
  • Sleep aid
  • Relaxation techniques
  • Meditation
  • Deep breathing
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