The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data presents the percentage of public transportation users divided by age group and place of residence in 2016.
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, the highest rate of passengers who use public transit is reported in major cities for almost all ages. In comparison, the percentage of other areas residents who use public transportation is much lower, but has a much steadier fluctuation between the ages. In large cities, about 70% of people between the ages of 31 and 45
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old are using public transportation, which is the highest rate of usage for both age and place of residence. The lowest numbers of passengers are registered in the age range of 61 to 75
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old for urban areas
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the other 76
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old in the countryside, with approximately 10% for each region. The life group of public transit passengers aged between 61 and 75
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old is the only group where the rate of usage in major cities is lower than in other regions, with approximately 10% and 20%, respectively.

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