The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given figure illustrates the recycling of
bottles
. Use synonyms
Overall
, it takes 9 different steps to recycle the Linking Words
bottles
, and Use synonyms
then
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finally
it is converted into useful products.
We see that, Linking Words
firstly
, the plastic Linking Words
bottles
are collected from a trash can. Use synonyms
Secondly
, it is sent to the recycling centre with the help of a truck. Linking Words
Thirdly
, sorting takes place i.e., the good quality Linking Words
bottles
are separated from the bad quality Use synonyms
one’s
. Change the noun form
ones
one
Whereas
in the fourth and fifth Linking Words
Use synonyms
step
, Fix the agreement mistake
steps
bottles
are now compressed into blocks and are sent for crushing Use synonyms
as well as
washing respectively.
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Furthermore
, using a very powerful machine the plastic is converted to pallets in Linking Words
the
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apply
step
6. Later, in order to produce raw materials the obtained pallets are Use synonyms
then
heated in Linking Words
step
7. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the raw materials are received and packed in Linking Words
step
8. In the Use synonyms
last
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step
, these are Use synonyms
then
utilized in making Linking Words
of
shirts, plastic bags, lunch boxes, etc.Change preposition
apply
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