The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given figure illustrates the recycling of
bottles
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.
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, it takes 9 different steps to recycle the
bottles
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, and
then
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finally
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it is converted into useful products. We see that,
firstly
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, the plastic
bottles
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are collected from a trash can.
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, it is sent to the recycling centre with the help of a truck.
Thirdly
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, sorting takes place i.e., the good quality
bottles
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are separated from the bad quality
one’s
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.
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in the fourth and fifth
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step
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,
bottles
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are now compressed into blocks and are sent for crushing
as well as
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washing respectively.
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, using a very powerful machine the plastic is converted to pallets in
the
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step
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6. Later, in order to produce raw materials the obtained pallets are
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heated in
step
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7.
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, the raw materials are received and packed in
step
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8. In the
last
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step
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, these are
then
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utilized in making
of
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shirts, plastic bags, lunch boxes, etc.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles, step with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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