The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given figure illustrates the recycling of
bottles
. Overall
, it takes 9 different steps to recycle the bottles
, and then
finally
it is converted into useful products.
We see that, firstly
, the plastic bottles
are collected from a trash can. Secondly
, it is sent to the recycling centre with the help of a truck. Thirdly
, sorting takes place i.e., the good quality bottles
are separated from the bad quality one’s
. Change the noun form
ones
one
Whereas
in the fourth and fifth step
, Fix the agreement mistake
steps
bottles
are now compressed into blocks and are sent for crushing as well as
washing respectively.
Furthermore
, using a very powerful machine the plastic is converted to pallets in the
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step
6. Later, in order to produce raw materials the obtained pallets are then
heated in step
7. Nevertheless
, the raw materials are received and packed in step
8. In the last
step
, these are then
utilized in making of
shirts, plastic bags, lunch boxes, etc.Change preposition
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