It is more important to use the space in cities well than make them look beautiful. 7b what extent do you agree?

Moving with the times,

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the dense migration cities became overpopulated which

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led

to a major use of empty

places

for the society’s needs. Some of them are used as important institutions, buildings and others, as parks and monuments. I partly agree that spaces need to be used

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since cities are more crowded,

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areas are in great demand. By offering

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citizens a roof

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, towns may raise a population increase. If the

places

are exploited effectively

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, cities will record many cases of employment and

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successful method of using human resources.

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, plots may serve as a base

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developing the economic side of a city. By building important institutions, infrastructure gets

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enhanced

for instance

, authorities decide to build

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an empty space a health centre

therefore

, the industrial sector of medicine progresses.

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lands may contribute as recreational

places

such

as public gardens, not only as tall concrete walls. Parks can boost

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happiness

hence

, the quality of life grows but

also

, beautiful organised areas can bring many tourists.

Not to mention

, by attracting income and being so visited these

places

can have chances of vandalism, deteriorating their surroundings

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benches,

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.

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, good urban organisation suppose the

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of green spaces. Their own target remains to

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conserve

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nature,

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carbon emissions ,but turn out to be overused by shops and advertisers. In the

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points. In conclusion, spaces need to be exploited in a rational way, by consulting the surrounding’s needs. In my opinion, urbanists need to understand how to cooperate, to use the land well or to make it look beautiful.