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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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The line graph illustrates the volume
movement
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 of goods moved within the UK by various ways to
transport
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 from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
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, goods transported have increased in all
modes
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 since 1974 wherein
road
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transport
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 has shown a continuous upward trend,
however
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, rail
transport
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 fluctuates.
On the other hand
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, water and
pipeline
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transport
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 mode has less
movement
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 in few years.
Initially
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, goods
movement
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 through
pipeline
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 mode has shown sharp move from 1974 to 1978 but other
modes
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 have no major
movement
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. A downtrend was observed in the
road
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 and rail
transport
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modes
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 between 1978 to around 1982 in
road
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 and rail
transport
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. There were no major changes in water and
pipeline
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transport
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 from 1982 to 1990 but at the same time
road
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transport
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 started an improvement from approximately 70
million
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tonnes
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 to 89
million
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tonnes
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.
Furthermore
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,
road
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transport
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 was the favourite among all the
modes
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 of
transport
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 since 1974 with stating approx 70
million
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tonnes
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 and water
transport
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 was the second largest popular which started in 1974 with below 40
million
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tonnes
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 and reached above 60 in 2002.
Pipeline
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transport
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 has shown lesser interest since the beginning and stuck with the same number of 20
million
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transport
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 from 1994 to 2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words movement, transport, modes, road, pipeline, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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