You have recently opened a store and want to have a website for this store. One of your friends can help you with this. Write a letter to the friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your newly-opened store. In your letter: · tell what your store or business sells · mention how you would want your website to look · provide some ideas on how you would like to keep your website updated Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Kerat, I hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing

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letter to request you for making a website for my newly established dorama store. In

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shop, all household gadgets, sports equipment and certain snacks

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as Lays, chocolates and candies would be sold.

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, there could be a section where I would personally sell the lotteries. As you are aware that there is a huge competition among dollar stores in my area.

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, I wish to make a website that would be professional, and that will depict the items

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their price, size and quantity. Despite these ,facts I would really appreciate it if I would be able to update my website daily.

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, it would be great if there could be a chat box and a discussion thread where I can answer the inquiries of customers at my earliest convenience. I hope you would comprehend it, and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Warm wishes, Rajwinder Kaur Brar

rajwinder85913Thu Aug 10 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

170 words

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