International tourism is now more common than ever before.some feel that this is a positive trend,while others do not

International tourism has increased considerably in the

last

Linking Words

50 years.Some feel that

this

Linking Words

is a positive trend,

while

Linking Words

others do not.In my perspective,

this

Linking Words

trend has benefits

Correct pronoun usage

that outweighed

show examples

outweighed

Wrong verb form

outweigh

show examples

the drawbacks.In the following paragraphs,I will analyze

this

Linking Words

issue with adequate examples. In my opinion,one of the

benefit

Change to a plural noun

benefits

show examples

is increasing

Correct article usage

the government

show examples

government

Change noun form

government's

show examples

economic level.Typically,when many

travelers

Change the spelling

travellers

show examples

take a trip to other nations

in

Change preposition

during

show examples

their holidays.

This

Linking Words

may

leads

Change the verb form

lead

show examples

to growth of economic consistency,

as well as

Linking Words

makes more new work opportunities for

an

Correct article usage

the

show examples

unemployed.

For instance

Linking Words

,Ella is one of the most popular destinations to visit in Sri Lanka.

In

Change preposition

Last

show examples

last

Linking Words

year more than one million people visited a mountain.

As a consequence

Linking Words

,surrounding places are industrialized

such

Linking Words

as hotels,restaurants,parks

plus

Correct word choice

and

show examples

so on.

As a consequence

Linking Words

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

, they

gives

Change the verb form

give

show examples

boost

Add an article

a boost

show examples

to

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

industrial profit well. Not surprisingly,

other

Change the wording

another

show examples

benefit

is promotes

Change the verb form

is promoting

show examples

local culture

as well as

Linking Words

increases

Wrong verb form

increasing

show examples

fraternity among other nations.

Accordingly

Linking Words

, every

nations

Change to a singular noun

nation

show examples

have specific

cultures

Fix the agreement mistake

culture

show examples

for

this

Linking Words

world.

Therefore

Linking Words

,

travelers

Change the spelling

travellers

show examples

had a chance to disguise cultures among people.

However

Linking Words

, tourism has

also

Linking Words

drawbacks

such

Linking Words

as it put enormous stress on land use,

along with

Linking Words

lead

Wrong verb form

leading

show examples

to increased pollution in

environment

Add an article

the environment

show examples

.

These effect

Change the determiner

This effect

These effects

show examples

can gradually destroy

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

environmental resources.

While

Linking Words

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

local government could prevent

this

Linking Words

issue by

hold

Replace the word

holding

show examples

legislation.

To conclude

Linking Words

, global

traveling

Change the spelling

travelling

show examples

has benefits

outweighed

Wrong verb form

outweigh

show examples

drawbacks.

By contrast

Linking Words

,I suggest

create

Change the verb form

creating

show examples

laws about environmental issues Among

travelers

Change the spelling

travellers

show examples

as well as

Linking Words

makes

Wrong verb form

making

show examples

more modern facilities

plus

Correct word choice

and

show examples

infrastructure in a country.