The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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given bar chart illustrates how many employees from two gender groups have been working in different types of occupations in Australia during the

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year.

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,

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a sizeable majority of women's population have been clerical, a huge number of men have been working in the trade realm as

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.

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,

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insignificant number of ladies worked as trade

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and in the field of production

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a minority of men's community were workers. At first glance,

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being trade

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and clerical were the two most common jobs among men and more than 800000

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were doing these economic activities

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working as a clerk and a professional were the most regular jobs among women by working more than 700000

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in those realms.

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, the less frequent occupations among females have been working as

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businesswoman

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businesswomen

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and working in production fields by 100000 ladies who were doing

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types of jobs

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less frequent works among males were working as a labour and

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semi-professional employees respectively by 500000 and fewer hired

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in these job positions.