Increasing the price of Petrol is the best way solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective ?

In the contemporary world, global warming is a challenging issue for the world.

However

, there are numerous reasons for

this

problem. The government raised the price of

petrol

in order to control

this

and

people

believe that it is the best solution to solve the growing

traffic

.

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to some extent I disagree with

this

point. So, I shed some light on other factors too which increases these issue.

To begin

with, in the justification of my notion a plethora of reasons for the contribution of different types of pollution. first of all, deforestation is the main cause of air pollution.

As a result

, climate changes occur which

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all the seasons.

Moreover

, the reduction in the rain

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drought situation in the world so, living can be difficult in

this

atmosphere.

Secondly

, industrialisation in city sites releases some toxic gases which are infused into the air and make it unhealthy for living things.

Furthermore

, the waste products of industries can

cause

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bad effects on health.

Hence

, at present

people

have more profound lung diseases

for example

lung cancers, third-degree asthma and most commonly severe chest infections.

On the other hand

, looking to the solutions pivotal for the country and

also

for the

people

.

Although

, increasing the price of

petrol

is not the best way to control the growing

traffic

while

the present of the other factors.

Therefore

, the government should improve the infrastructure of the cities and builds some new road which will be one way.

As a result

, the load of the

traffic

will be distributed and the diesel and

petrol

vehicles should be replaced with electric ones.

This

kind of action can reduce the pollution in the environment.

Furthermore

, you can

courage

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people

to use public transport or cycle which can decrease the number of vehicles on the road. Another solution, cutting the trees should be stopped and foster the citizens to grow new plants which has a positive impact on the environment.

To conclude

, growing

traffic

and population become serious problems to deal with.

Although

, there are various other effective measures which overcome these issues. The government should take into account other effective solutions despite increasing the price of

petrol

.