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The table below gives infromation on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives infromation on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates the percentage of national
consumer
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expenditure
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 by three different
items
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 in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and
Turkey
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 in 2002.
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, it can be clearly seen that the most
consumer
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 spending was on food/drinks/tobacco,
while
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 leisure/education was the least
consumer
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expenditure
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. Looking at the information in more detail,
Turkey
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 and Ireland were the highest
consumer
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 spending on food/drinks/tobacco at 32.14% and 28.91% respectively. Meanwhile, the other three countries spending their money on these
items
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 were less than 20%.
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, the highest
expenditure
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 on clothing or footwear was in Italy at 9%.
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, followed by
Turkey
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 and Spain at 6.63% and 6.51% respectively. National
consumer
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 spending their budget on leisure or education was less than 5% where
Turkey
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 was the highest
expenditure
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 for
this
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 category at 4.35%. Consumers in Sweden and Italy expensed their money on these
items
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 at 3.22% and 3.20% respectively. The least
expenditure
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 on these
items
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 was Spain at just under 2%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumer, expenditure, items, turkey with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumer spending
  • Expenditure
  • Category
  • Tobacco
  • Percentage
  • Comparison
  • Figures
  • Leisure
  • Education
  • Summary
  • Overview
  • Contrast
  • Data
  • Statistics
  • Detailed analysis
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