It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age .punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?. What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
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children
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the difference
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definately
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.
Parents and teachers should observe children
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and understand the root causes of bad behaviour
. This
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of their Correct article usage
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.Furthermore
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punishment
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Moreover
, it will be helpful in controlling their habits and behaviour
. Any severe physical punishment
should not be given to them. As it makes them resentful and angry . punishment
should be done in such
a manner that children
learn the difference between good and bad behaviour
.
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