Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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television programs, magazines, and newspaper articles focusing on many aspects of

celebrities

appear to have grown considerably in recent years. In the internet age, these relative news coverages are spared everywhere quickly by the media.

Therefore

,

children

who are living in the Internet age

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avoid contacting some information about starts from the network. Amount of parents think that

coverages

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of

celebrities

are

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negative for

children

. Regardless, I partly believe

this

point in some way.

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topic and give my own views.

Firstly

,

this

is a

time

-consuming activity when

children

are attracted to

celebrities

' stories. Most

children

don’t have good discipline when they encounter nemours attractive reports

celebrities

from the internet,

above all

students who already finish classes that day and feel tired. These tired students always

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feel relaxed and joyful when they start headlines.

Therefore

, they are unable to control

time

in these relative coverages and spend much

time

on

this

.

For example

, Johnny, a twelve-year-old child, every

time

he uses his computer or phone to read articles about

celebrities

' scandals and entertainment news.

This

not only leads to his addiction and sometimes a distraction from studying.

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he slowly loses connections with the real world.

Nevertheless

, there is a benefit when

children

have an addiction to entertainment news.

Celebrities

' coverage is often a popular topic of daily conversation.

Furthermore

, by sharing

this

information,

children

could engage more sassily in conversations with their friends.

For instance

, a shy girl increases confidence in a social environment by sharing interesting gossip headlines as she feels knowledgeable and engages in their discussion. In conclusion,

children

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attracted to media coverage of

celebrities

and spend much valuable

time

with these

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children

also

are

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easier to engage in conversation.

Therefore

, I partly agree

this

information has an adverse influence on

children

.

However

, it is important for parents

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to supervise their

children

and ensure it does not have any influence on their studies.