The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart shows data about how families spent their weekly
income
in 1968 and 2018 in a nation.
Use synonyms
Overall
, in 1968 they spent Linking Words
the
most Correct article usage
apply
their
money Change preposition
of their
for
Change preposition
on
food
and they only spend a Use synonyms
few
Correct quantifier usage
little
Use synonyms
income
Change to a plural noun
incomes
for
fuel and power. Meanwhile, in 2018 many people spend a lot of money for leisure and a little for Change preposition
on
personals
goods.
A deep analysis of the bar chart provided reveals the percentage of spending on Change the noun form
personal
food
in 1968 is highest Use synonyms
with
35%. Change preposition
at
In contrast
, they don't use a Linking Words
lot
money for fuel and power with only around 7% of Add the preposition
oflot
weekly
Correct pronoun usage
their weekly
income
. The percentage of spending on Use synonyms
food
doubled between 1968 and 2018.
It is Use synonyms
notice able
that Correct your spelling
noticeable
in
2018 people spent the most Capitalize word
In
their
weekly Change preposition
of their
income
Use synonyms
for
leisure Change preposition
on
with
about 24% and Change preposition
at
lowest
Correct article usage
the lowest
with
around 4% Change preposition
at
for
personal goods and fuel power similar Change preposition
on
with
in 1968. The percentage of spending on Change preposition
to
food
Use synonyms
slightly
over Add a missing verb
is slightly
around
6% more than Change preposition
apply
for
housing.Change preposition
on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, food with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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