The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.
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The depicted map compares Norbiton industrial site with its future plan.
Overall
, some main features of the site stays
identical in the future plan but some features will be replaced or added to the area.
The town on the west side of the district stays Change the verb form
stay
indentical
to the past, Correct your spelling
identical
also
the square
in the middle, the main road
on the South side and the road
initiated from the central square
to the East will be the same in the future but the zone will be connected to the river on the North of the Norbiton area. The farmland will stay over the river but it is going to be moved from North to North-east next to the accommodation zone.
There are so many features which are going to be added to the zone for example
, there is
going to be houses replaced with factory units around the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
square
, along the East road
and over the river, next to the bridge. In addition
, there will be shops on the West corner of the square
, a medical center
in front of it on the South-East of the Change the spelling
centre
square
. At the end
ofthe
East Correct your spelling
of the
road
, a school will be constructed and right before reaching the school on the North side of the road
there will be a Add a comma
,road
play ground
available. Correct your spelling
playground
Finally
, new roads are going to be constructed initiating from Add an article
the center
center
of the location to the North-west and North.Change the spelling
centre
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Vocabulary: Replace the words square, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "stays" was used 3 times.
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