The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.

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The depicted map compares Norbiton industrial site with its future plan.

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, some main features of the site

stays

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stay

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identical in the future plan but some features will be replaced or added to the area. The town on the west side of the district stays

indentical

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identical

to the past,

also

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the

square

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in the middle, the main

road

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on the South side and the

road

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initiated from the central

square

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to the East will be the same in the future but the zone will be connected to the river on the North of the Norbiton area. The farmland will stay over the river but it is going to be moved from North to North-east next to the accommodation zone. There are so many features which are going to be added to the zone

for example

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, there

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going to be houses replaced with factory units around the

square

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, along the East

road

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and over the river, next to the bridge.

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, there will be shops on the West corner of the

square

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, a medical

center

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in front of it on the South-East of the

square

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At the end

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ofthe

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of the

East

road

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, a school will be constructed and right before reaching the school on the North side of the

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road

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,road

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there will be a

play ground

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available.

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, new roads are going to be constructed initiating from

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the center

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center

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centre

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of the location to the North-west and North.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words square, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "stays" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

236 words

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