The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.

The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.
The depicted map compares Norbiton industrial site with its future plan.
Overall
, some main features of the site
stays
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identical in the future plan but some features will be replaced or added to the area. The town on the west side of the district stays
indentical
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identical
to the past,
also
the
square
in the middle, the main
road
on the South side and the
road
initiated from the central
square
to the East will be the same in the future but the zone will be connected to the river on the North of the Norbiton area. The farmland will stay over the river but it is going to be moved from North to North-east next to the accommodation zone. There are so many features which are going to be added to the zone
for example
, there
is
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going to be houses replaced with factory units around the
square
, along the East
road
and over the river, next to the bridge.
In addition
, there will be shops on the West corner of the
square
, a medical
center
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in front of it on the South-East of the
square
.
At the end
ofthe
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of the
East
road
, a school will be constructed and right before reaching the school on the North side of the
road
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there will be a
play ground
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playground
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available.
Finally
, new roads are going to be constructed initiating from
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the center
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center
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centre
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of the location to the North-west and North.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words square, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "stays" was used 3 times.

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