The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans illustrate the town of Birshire in its current form and its purposed development. Looking from the

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perspective, it is readily apparent that

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area will experience

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of different changes,

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main roads and a public park will be unaltered.

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the purposed layout, the Corbie Road will be extended and cross That Street on the right side at the top of the given map.

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, the new part of That Street will be established on the left side,

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it will be perpendicular to Mc Road, with a roundabout constructed in the centre.

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, a few narrow streets will be built to connect Mc Road with a car park and new houses. With regards to the buildings, the number of houses will be increased by approximately two times,

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places

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as the farmer’s market and the sports centre will be completely destroyed.

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, the Griffin and the Hool farm will be demolished and replaced by a new supermarket and a car park respectively.

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The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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