The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The plans illustrate the town of Birshire in its current form and its purposed development. Looking from the
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that
this
area will experience
number
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a number
the number
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of different changes,
while
main roads and a public park will be unaltered.
According to
the purposed layout, the Corbie Road will be extended and cross That Street on the right side at the top of the given map.
In addition
, the new part of That Street will be established on the left side,
therefore
it will be perpendicular to Mc Road, with a roundabout constructed in the centre.
Also
, a few narrow streets will be built to connect Mc Road with a car park and new houses. With regards to the buildings, the number of houses will be increased by approximately two times,
while
places
such
as the farmer’s market and the sports centre will be completely destroyed.
However
, the Griffin and the Hool farm will be demolished and replaced by a new supermarket and a car park respectively.
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