The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts provide data about what technological devices people aged from 18 to 25 used for watching
television
in Canada in the years 2009 and 2019.
Overall
, in the beginning, traditional
tv
was the biggest segment
while
the tablet made up the smallest part of the chart. In comparison, young people used conventional
television
the least and
television
is mostly watched on flat-screen
Tv
and mobile phone by them in the year 2019. As can be seen from the illustration in 2009, most Canadians of
this
age group preferred to watch
tv
on a conventional device.
This
was followed in second place by laptops, with 20
percent
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per cent
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. The desktop computer was the third most preferred device
this
year with 18 % of
viewers
.
While
the rest of the
viewers
of 15% watched
tv
on their mobile phones, the proportion of
viewers
on flat-screen and tablets was 8% and 5% respectively.
At the end
of the period, the number of Canadians who used conventional
tv
as a device to watch
television
went into free fall
while
the rates of those who used a laptop and a desktop for watching
Tv
had declined by 8% and 6% respectively.
On the other hand
, the figures for
Tv
viewers
on flat-screen drastically increased by 19% whilst the
tv
viewers
on mobile phones and tablets had considerable improvement by 11% and 14% respectively.
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