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The bar chart details the amount of waste that was disposed of via landfill, burning and dumping at sea, in a particular European country between 2005 and 2008.

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Presented for consideration is a bar chart detailing figures for
rubbish
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 dumped at
sea
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, burned and dumped in landfills in a certain country in Europe from 2005 to 2008.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
amount
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 of
rubbish
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 disposed of via
landfill
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 saw a downward trend
while
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 the
amount
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 of
waste
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 burned experienced an upward trend.
In addition
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, another salient point is that the figure for
rubbish
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 dumped at
sea
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 remained steady during the first 3-year period. Looking at the figures in
further
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 detail, it is evident that the most popular method in 2005 is dumping in
landfill
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 sites, at 1800. Meanwhile, the
amount
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 of
waste
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 dumped at
sea
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 only made up one-third of the
landfill
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 at 600
whereas
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 the quantity of
rubbish
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 burned was at approximately 500. The year 2006 witnessed a decrease of 600 in the figure for
rubbish
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 dumped in landfills.
In contrast
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, the
amount
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 of
waste
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 burned rose by 100. Turning to the remaining statistics, the quantity of
rubbish
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 disposed of via
landfill
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 and dumped at
sea
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 decreased to 900 and 600 respectively in 2007
while
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 the
amount
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 of
waste
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 burned increased to 700. In 2008, the garbage disposal method preferred
above all
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 others was burning which was at 900.
Besides
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, the
amount
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 of
rubbish
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 dumped in landfills fell to 600, one-third of its figure 4 years ago
while
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 the quantity of garbage dumped at
sea
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 was just 550.
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