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In some countries, girls and boys are studied in different schools rather than in the same schools. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this.

#countries #girls #boys #schools
Nowadays many nations are imposing new
education
policy
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 in separate
school
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schools
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 and
classes
 for male and female attendees.
Whereas
 it seems to me that there will be more advantages than demerits. for
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 will examine both of the
prospect
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 of
this
 phenomenon. Several schools around the globe would offer
gender
education
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 determining various prospective
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teaching methods
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 boys and girls
students
.
however
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the student
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student
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students
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 will face less distraction around
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similar
gender
 of peoples.
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, there will be
less
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 chances of
gender
 discrimination in uncertain fights between
students
whereas
teaching
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method
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 should be determined an important role to contribute. It is pretty reasonable for both males and
females
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 attendees for studying in different
environment
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environments
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.
For example
, some topic would have to undermine in regular
classes
 where all student has been studying together but
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classes
 and
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in
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teachers would be more comfortable
to explain
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 these topics individually to
students
.
On the other hand
, there will be
dishonest
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 for teaching methods and
gender
 equality. It could become
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 concern in providing
education
.
For instance
,
students
 might face less interaction
on
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classes
 which could affect social communication development in them.
Education
 will become expensive to provide
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 schools where
teacher
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teachers
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 have to put reliance on a separate skill set like different interactive
method
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 for every
studen
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student
.
In addition
, many would still prefer regular schooling surrounding
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girls and boys in the same class and it should be
vital
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 point to gain knowledge from both prospective
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 individual. The school for every sex will encourage racism and discrimination concerns.
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 viewpoint about where they could fill themselves comfort table whether it's in boys only school, our girls only all advantageous
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 would easily outweigh its disadvantages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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