The bar graph show the global sales (in billions of dollars) by the four popular digital games from 2000 to 2006
The bar graph gives information about the global
sales
(in billions of dollars) of four types of digital games
over the seven years period
.
Overall
, handheld games
hit the highest point of global sales
from 2000 to 2006. By contrast
, the sales
of console games
showed a downward trend throughout the period
. The sales
of mobile and online games
increased stability.
In 2000, handheld games’
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games
sales
had the biggest point at $6 billion
. Until 2006, the sales
of handheld games
reached a peak at under $18 billion
and became the first position in global sales
. The sales
of console games
stood at $6 billion
initially
,
but declined gradually every year and their Remove the comma
apply
sales
had a half at the end
of the period
.
Online and mobile phone games’
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games
sales
started rising in 2001 and 2002 at around 1 and 2 billion
dollars respectively. However
, in the last
period
, the
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their
sales
of them increased rapidly by around 8 and 5 billion
dollars.Submitted by rint608 on
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