The pie chart below shows the different platforms used for international news content by people in the United Kingdom in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the different platforms used for international news content by people in the United Kingdom in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart
illustates
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illustrates
that
people
used different
platform
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platforms
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for international
news
-content in the United Kingdom in 2019.
Overall
, television was the most
famouse
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famous
source of international
news
.
While
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words of mouth used for
news
was only 1%. We can see that
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43% of
people
used television for international
nwes
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news
content which was the highest
souce
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source
of
news
as compared with
other
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others
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.
Whereas
, 15% of
people
relied on
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the internet
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internet
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.
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Similarly
,
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folks
flocks
had not interested (15%) in
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international
news
.
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Moreover
, social media stood
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3rd position in
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of international
news
contentnwith
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content with
14%.
However
, other platforms of international
news
content contain less than 10%. Printed newspapers were 8% of
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while
, radio provided
infomation
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information
that half of
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news papers
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newspapers
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.
On the contrary
,
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contect
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contact
was contain only 1% of
internation
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international
news
contrent
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content
by
people
.
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