The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparasions where relevant.
The presented graph illustrates the differences
about
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in
number
of books
that the students at Starmouth School have read in the library until
2006 to now.
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from
books
read by girls
is higher than the
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that
boys
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by boys
It is clear that
in 2009 the
male students Correct article usage
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have
read a lot of Unnecessary verb
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books
than the
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about
more than 20 Change preposition
by
percent
. In the next year, the Change the spelling
per cent
number
of the
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apply
boys
still increased from 50 books
in 2009 to 80 books
in 2010 and the quantity of the
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girls
slightly rose with
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to
percent
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per cent
in
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at
the
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dramatically
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dramatic
from
the Change preposition
in
girls
, they just have had only 40 books
in 2010, but in 2011 they have
read 100 Unnecessary verb
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books
which are
the same Correct subject-verb agreement
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number
as the boys
. After that, the girls
have
reached their tops with 140 Unnecessary verb
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books
that they have read but at that time, the boy students significantly declined from 100 to 80 books
.
Overall
, the individuals can realize that although
at the
first time the Correct article usage
apply
number
of books
read by boys
more
than the Add a missing verb
is more
number
of the
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apply
girls
, but
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apply
the
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girls
tend to read books
more than the
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apply
boys
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